I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hey Zoe my name is Nga-Toki I am a Year 8 Paihia school student. I like that you put a huge photo of a turtle in the back because it made it more interesting . My class and I have also been learning how to use slides more often in our work. Do you like seafood? Good work keep it up.
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Hey Zoe my name is Nga-Toki I am a Year 8 Paihia school student.
ReplyDeleteI like that you put a huge photo of a turtle in the back because it made it more interesting . My class and I have also been learning how to use slides more often in our work. Do you like seafood? Good work keep it up.