I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora Zoe, my name is Thea and I am a year six student at Paihia School. I really enjoyed going through your penguin slide because it taught me all sorts of information about penguins I didn’t know! I liked how you put lots of different backgrounds on each slide. Do you think you could make another slide about a different animals? Keep up the FANTASTIC work!
Kia ora Zoe, my name is James. I am a year eight at Paihia School. I like your post because you put a cute baby penguin photo. I love penguins because they are small and they can jump high and they can eat fish. Do you love baby penguins?
Kia ora Zoe my name is Nga-Toki I am a year 8 student from Paihia School. I like your post because Penguins are one of my favorite animals. Your slideshow was interesting and taught me some other facts about penguins like the different kinds of penguins. Do you know how long can penguins live for?
Kia ora Zoe my name is Shay, I am a year 7 student from Paihia school I enjoyed reading your blog about Penguins because penguins are one of my favourite animals but my first favourite animal is a snake then a penguin. Also I like how you added information about penguins and what they look like and what they eat.
Hi my name is Jayden i’m a year 7 and I go to Paihia School. I liked your post about penguins, because penguins are great animals. I really enjoyed going through your penguin slide because it taught me all sorts of information about penguins
Hi my name is Ana, I’m a year seven student who goes to Paihia School. I like your post about penguins because I like penguins they are so cute. I know that penguin are very hard to touch.
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Kia ora Zoe, my name is Thea and I am a year six student at Paihia School. I really enjoyed going through your penguin slide because it taught me all sorts of information about penguins I didn’t know! I liked how you put lots of different backgrounds on each slide. Do you think you could make another slide about a different animals? Keep up the FANTASTIC work!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Zoe, my name is James. I am a year eight at Paihia School. I like your post because you put a cute baby penguin photo. I love penguins because they are small and they can jump high and they can eat fish. Do you love baby penguins?
ReplyDeleteHi James I do like baby penguins they are so fluffy I have seen them before in Aussie Bye!!
DeleteKia ora Zoe my name is Nga-Toki I am a year 8 student from Paihia School.
ReplyDeleteI like your post because Penguins are one of my favorite animals. Your slideshow was interesting and taught me some other facts about penguins like the different kinds of penguins.
Do you know how long can penguins live for?
Hi there Nga-Toki thanks for the good feed back I think some live up to 20 or 7 Bye
DeleteKia ora Zoe my name is Shay, I am a year 7 student from Paihia school I enjoyed reading your blog about Penguins because penguins are one of my favourite animals but my first favourite animal is a snake then a penguin. Also I like how you added information about penguins and what they look like and what they eat.
ReplyDeleteHave you seen a penguin in real life?
Hi my name is Jayden i’m a year 7 and I go to Paihia School. I liked your post about penguins, because penguins are great animals. I really enjoyed going through your penguin slide because it taught me all sorts of information about penguins
ReplyDeleteHave you seen a penguin in real life?
Hi my name is Ana, I’m a year seven student who goes to Paihia School. I like your post about penguins because I like penguins they are so cute. I know that penguin are very hard to touch.
ReplyDeleteHave you ever touched a penguin?