Friday, 15 June 2018
All about me
Hi my name is Zoe.I am a girl. I am 9 years old. I go to Waitohu school room 3 i have a twin brother.I live In Otaki. My favorite Movie is Bfg. The favorite thing about School is writing .
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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - something I have done well.
Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.
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Hello, i like how you added you favorite movie because i dont think a lot of other people have and also my name is Zoe too!
ReplyDeleteI love writing to but what's your favorite thing to write about?
Your blog post is great! Just one thing on your first sentence you didn't do a space after you full stop.
From Zoe.