Monday, 3 September 2018

I Am Poem

         I Am Poem
I am a cat  I am rushing to  leaves
I wonder if I have a twin
I hear humans echoing
I see a foggy cloud
I want   to see more cats cause I am alone


I am a cat
I pretend I am running  a marathon
I feel jolly
I touch the grass when it's hot  it feels nice
I worry  about my safety
I cry  when I need a bath


I am a fluffy cat
I understand that I need a bath
I say mew when I am happy
I dream  of being a rock star
I try to fly
I hope I get  a piece of cake

I am a silly cat by Zoe
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3 comments:

  1. Hey Zoe, I really like the picture of the cat, I like how you said i want to be a rockstar, I did a cat for my poem too!,

    Bye from Zoe

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  2. hello Zoe im Brazil im from kaingaroa next time youse full stops.

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  3. Hi my name is lyric i am from kaingaroa school i like your cat poem the cat look cute and funny

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