I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hey Zoe, My names Bella and I am your Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu buddy. I think this is a very interesting blog post and it has lots of cool facts. Whats your favourite animal? Mines a monkey! Next time to be BTB (Better Than Before) Maybe you could add a little bit more and a quality caption. Have a good day, Bella.
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Hey Zoe, My names Bella and I am your Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu buddy. I think this is a very interesting blog post and it has lots of cool facts. Whats your favourite animal? Mines a monkey! Next time to be BTB (Better Than Before) Maybe you could add a little bit more and a quality caption.
ReplyDeleteHave a good day, Bella.