Today I had to read a book with animals in them I picked some of the animals and here are the facts!
Wednesday, 19 May 2021
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Hi Zoe. It's Miro H from Paroa school here! This is really cool! I like how you did lots of different types of animals, not just Herbivores or Carnivores. Which animal is your favorite out of Zebras, Lions, Elephants and Giraffes? I love Lions. Next time you could maybe check/proofread your work for mistakes. Thanks, and Bye!
ReplyDeleteHello Zoe! I'm Lucy from Paroa School,
ReplyDeleteThis psot is really nice and easy to read but next time you could proof read before posting. Rase is spelt raise, pray is spelt prey. But that's fine, everyone makes mistakes! Did you know that lions don't hunt but the females, lionesses do! Also, zebra's don't have black and white stripes that have black skin with white stripes, isn't that cool!
Lucy
i like your use of facts and your lay out i think you did really good nice job.
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