Thursday, 19 August 2021

Narrative Writing

One gloomy day I had a weird dream my Grandfather had this dark,dirty book. At the time it was like real life.

The next day I went to Grandfather's house and seen if he was there he was he was sitting on his very old 1960s piano he was playing this peaceful song called Moonlight I went up to and whisper Grandad I have a question!

He said Go ahead So I told him Well , I had this realistic dream that you had this book and it went missing or something and it looked like it had something special about it. Do you have any old books like this? I showed him the drawing I made that looked like the book.

My grandfather looked at Me oh no we don't talk about that book he leaves.

That was very strange I ignored it and tried asking him again he said "Well it was about "

My old darkest secrets and stuff I tried looking for it but then I went to the piano and played a song but the book kept on popping up in my head and my gut feeling was that it was in the piano!

I went to go and open the lid of the piano and it was dusty there I felt my jaw drop it was the book I whispered to myself omg! I grabbed it and opened it was so disgusting I took it with Me and left suddenly I open the page it was some weird things one said it need to end it gave me chills but then there was a petrifying it said this is my friend Lisa she is my imagine friend nobody knows who she is and other stuff.

I went back to my grandfather's house and showed him he said it wasn't his then he pointed at my Nan's old doll it looks like her! The drawing looked exactly like Lisa I put the two next to each other it was then the lights went out.


1 comment:

  1. Wow Zoe! You really got me hooked into this writing piece! I wonder what happens nexts? Maybe you could continue this writing piece with a part 2. Keep up the great work!

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