I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 30 July 2021
Thursday, 1 July 2021
My Week 9 Writing!
One day there were two little girls named Ella and Lucy who went missing about 2 years ago. Rumours have it the witches took them it was one dark night Lucy and Ella were playing with there dolls they were having a lovely time sitting there in there rooms Ella and Lucy's Mum wasn't very good she would always come home very late either drunk or tired and grumpy so she would leave them alone just to know that got kidnapped when they were 5 so they are now 7 any way Ella was more of the responsible one and Lucy was a silly kid and would bully Ella a lot.
So they were sitting there with there dolls and heard a knock at the door they both jumped onto the couch and looked outside this old lady was say you whooo open the door? it's grandma Ella grabbed a stool and stood on it and opened the door Hello Lucy said Ella was sceptical and said Who are you? Next minute a white van turns up the woman turned green and her nose and her nails were long ah a Witch she grabs both of them they screamed and kicked nothing to help then they went missing!
So up to this day they are still gone so Zoe decided to go look for them. I started off by tracking their spots and seeing if there was more DNA because nobody has touched the house in years since they have gone which is good cause there could be more DNA.
I walked in the house and picked up the doll Lucy dropped and put it in the bag anything I could find I put in it smelt weird kinda like blood there was blood I grabbed a swab and tested it then it got dark I went back into the lab and got everything done and I waited for the results but also while I was walking back there was a weird wig it was grey so I grabbed it.
After that they finished and yes it came up with Lucy and Ella's and this weird woman that was like faded out a bit the photos matched the ones that were in the last photo they took but this Woman she was weird her name was Millie she was a old bag of a thing nobody liked her only her cats she had about 12 of them.
So I went up to the lab and seen what happened everything and finger prints I made sure that they weren't mine it matches the same DNA s and everything now I had to check the footprints and everything next step was trying to look for them I put a swat team out and the police and a lot of things I went out and the first thing I did was look for the license plate cause that would have to be the most obvious it was white and it looked like a delivery mans truck I drove around and looked searched and search then I went to the creepy alley where everybody looks for lost things cats even sometimes there trash so I went there nobody was there but there was a car it was like the one that was description and same exult license places I noted the police and they were searched around but were hiding just in case it was obvious that the Millie could see them I made sure nobody was watching and crawled in with my gun and pocket knife just incase plus my walkies talkie but I put it on silent the first thing I saw it was dark and cold nobody seemed to be in there.
I found a spot and hide in there but suddenly a big bang coming from the basement and again,again it keeps happening than a Woman not a old woman but a young one walked out and then she changed she was like a shape shiftier she turned into a man then a old woman next minute a WITCH! she stayed like that and yelled out shut up shut up! in an angry voice she ran down into the basement.
I walked out of my spot and went into the kitchen there were photos of little girls looking like Ella and Lucy one blonde one and one brown haired one it looked exactly like them I grabbed the photos and walked into another room there was a huge clipboard full of evil plans next I seen a photo of me I was in danger alot of terbillie things I read then at the end there was Zoe will be next I got a goose bump on my arm I looked around and a sudden shock came across since I went to my Grans so I couldn't do it anymore.
I told my Gran and asked her back in the old days did you believe in Witches she replied with um why shall you ask that? Zoe said well I have been researching about Lucy and Ella's case and they need to find were they are cause I wanted to look for them and rescue them anyway Gran said to go to sleep but her voice keeped echoing saying Witches aren't real on and on it happens over and over I went to bed and looked out the window two images of little kids were standing there then a Witch I jumped out the window and went to get them the image sprinted into the woods Lucy and Ella's faces turned around lip sync help me 109 tea rd they ran off I thought that's were they are I jumped in my Grans car and went to tea road the door seamed I went and ran quickly and opend the door I tackled the Witch and I grabbed him and I saved the the girls then ran away I got 1m bucks for saving them and yes witches were real! And Millie she got arreased 50 years The End! That's My Writing I hope you like it.
Wednesday, 30 June 2021
Friday, 25 June 2021
The Queen Has Been Saved!
One day there were two best friends called Lyla and Zoe.
Lyla and Zoe lived together but they had been watching the news and they heard that the Queen was in danger and they had to save her idmeatilly.
Lyla and Zoe packed off and hopped in Lylas White Jeep and took off as fast as possible and they drove for hours and they had to find the place cause Zoe forgot the map Lyla was angry they packed food,water and a baseball bat to help.
Lyla and Zoe found the place. It was green,white and looked very old. It was sound with water down below because it was on a hill that had bridges connected to another one. It is cool and big. They have bodyguards with guns protecting the Queen.
But if you didn't know that the Queen is in danger and she's going to get kidnapped by one of her bodyguards but only Zoe and Lyla know this and they have been chosen to help her to escape when Zoe and Lyla got there they looked up and were in shock Zoe had never ever seen something this big Lyla was scared.
They both entered the castle and went to go look for her but it wasn't that easy since it was night time the big lights were on and about 2 security people guarding the levels they sneakily entered and walk to the main office nobody was in the and the door was wide open Zoe and Lyla went on to the cameras to see where everyone was the were all in the Dining room waiting for there food there was about 8 people sitting in there they seen that all the the bodyguards were also in there.
Lyla whisper to Zoe let's go in that room number 1 to see what is in there then we will find the Queens room to give her hints that somebody is helping her but she doesn't know that she is in danger so that is going to be a big worry so Zoe got a plan out to what they were going to do and yeah Lyla was excited to save the day and to rescue the Queen when they went to the room there wasn't anything in there only a mirror a bed and a closet.
Zoe and Lyla heard thumping noise coming there way the hid under the table for safety then two large men entered the room and started talking what is that smell one said it smells like a fart Lyla looked at me and whisper she farted but sadly the men seen Zoe foot out and he said "OI who is there" Zoe and Lyla quickly sprained into one of the massive bathrooms and locked themself in there they were huffing and puffing Phew that was a close one Zoe said.
Lyla started grabbing things out of the backpack she grabbed a baseball bat to get ready she said to Zoe are you ready? Yes and they both ran out into another room that looked like the Queens room cause it had crowns and jewels they waited and spared some clues for the Queen.
They gave about 5 hints because only the Queen could go in this room so it would be okay the 1st one was a kidnapping sign 2nd was a sos sign and there was more Lyla heard the foot steps and tapped Zoe and they both crawled out cause they were hiding they went back to the main offices and seen that 5 of her bodyguards were coming so they got ready one in the special room called Jelws and Golds had all her amazing diamonds crowns but suddenly one of her body guards ran in and took the Jelw and ran off with it frightly the door swung open.
Zoe looked at the tall man and Lyla screamed her head off AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ZOE WHAT DO WE DO!!!!!!!
Zoe grabbed the baseball bat and swang it at him she ended out knocking out 3 of them and Lyla kicked the other two and they left a note saying we will save her and Zoe grabbed the keys and locked them out of that room the other 3 that had the Jewel were walking into a room which Lyla thought that it could be the bodyguards sleeping zone they walked up to it and Yes indeed Lyla was correct Zoe gave her a little high five they secretly,crawled into the room cause the bodyguards were talking very loud one of them said yes finally we got it the magic the best one of them all another one said but the last one said HEY! WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN HERE Zoe and Lyla gulped um um Zoe yelled TO SAVE THE QUEEN but it was to late one said wait wait Zoe where is the other dude oh no Zoe grabbed her baseball bat and swang it and it knocked them out quick Zoe we have to go.
They both went into the dinner room and they faulty seen the Queen's hand quick stop them they ran super speed and kicked the mans bum what do you think your doing the Queen tried to say help but it didn't work he ended up tasting both Zoe and Lyla and fell to the ground they were knocked out for about 10 minutes cause of the shock of the taze Lyla woke up Zoe quick Zoe said go without me since they couldn't call the cops cause of the bad signal they had to keep going.
They found the man but he ran off into the woods and realized oh wait we put a trap there he fell into the trap with the Queen in his hands he had about over 50 Jewls and Golds in that bag! Zoe and Lyla said let her go he said no no I need the Jewels Lyla said here have this one please I incees it was a fake one he said okay okay then stood up and grabbed it no Lyla said and knocked him out again Zoe got the Queen and said if she was okay the police ended up coming and the news and Zoe and Lyla got over 100m books for rescuing her and they got the bodyguards and took them to maxaquin jail for 10000 years Lyla and Zoe were happy and the Queen gave her both 5 jewels then they lived in luxury for ever! The End


