I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hey Zoe, It's Clara from Paroa. I really like your Rally car dudes post! Maybe next time you could add a little more information, even tho the amount of writing described your thing very well. \ BYEEEE
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something I have done well. Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.
hey good work
ReplyDeleteHey Zoe, It's Clara from Paroa. I really like your Rally car dudes post! Maybe next time you could add a little more information, even tho the amount of writing described your thing very well. \
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