I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
hi Zoe, Its Grace from Paroa school. I like your poster about penguins. The facts are very interesting and awesome to read! You did a really good job. From Grace
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Hi Zoe, My name is Lyla I am a year 8 at Otaki college I really really like your post!
ReplyDeleteHi Zoe it's Kasey i just wont to say that a enjoy you facts
ReplyDeleteHi Zoe this is a cool post about penguins.
ReplyDeletehi zoe i really like your blog post about penguins awesome job!
ReplyDeletehi Zoe, Its Grace from Paroa school. I like your poster about penguins. The facts are very interesting and awesome to read! You did a really good job.
ReplyDeleteFrom Grace